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New at this Rendering !!

AdeyMaCKAdeyMaCK Posts: 0
edited December 1969 in Art Studio

A render entitled "Frame from a Sci-Fi...." , any comments welcome , if I'm on the right track.

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2000 x 2000 - 587K

Comments

  • MavroshMavrosh Posts: 111
    edited December 1969

    You definately are on the right track! I am curious what else you will come up with! :)

  • SickleYieldSickleYield Posts: 7,640
    edited December 1969

    There is visible clipping at the base of each breast. Probably should add a collision or push modifier or check the clothing piece for fixit morphs.


    Otherwise it's got good lighting and composition. The postwork is obtrusive but it seems to work well with it - kind of a graphic novel vibe.

  • NovicaNovica Posts: 23,895
    edited December 1969

    I love the foot coming out of the bottom of the scene- very nice! Intense emotions very well portrayed!
    Cathie

  • Scott LivingstonScott Livingston Posts: 4,341
    edited December 1969

    Except for the issue that SickleYield mentioned, this looks great! I particularly like the lighting and expression. I think the postwork framing is effective too. On the right track for sure!

  • Tramp GraphicsTramp Graphics Posts: 2,412
    edited December 1969

    I agree with the others, very well done. Aside from the poke-through in the breasts, I do see one other "issue" with the composition that bothers me, though. The top of the frame cuts a little too close to her head for my comfort. I'd suggest giving her a little more "headroom" next time.

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